TheEstimableEelz

A sonnet! And one I didn't notice was a sonnet initially, at that. (And though irrelevant, your signature gave me moment to chuckle.) Most noticeable thing: no periods. The pure ...

Well, this was okay. Firstly! Points off for "make sure your prepared for the cold" - it should be "you're." Now then... I liked the format - consistency worked in ...

Liked this piece. Haven't seen line breaks with prominent enjambment this good in a while; love the way you did that. Although, whether anything is actually enjambed is arguable, since ...

Loving the nonsense and the sense. and anything as better than what we don't (Line break added, I think it makes the lines more in keeping with the 'nonsense' thing.) ...

Okay. Conflicted feelings here. Love what you're trying to do but the execution leaves a few things to be desired. Just to get it out of the way, there's a ...

What is reality that I let it define me? Just concrete clumps of molecules that tell me how to be me . I don't think you need the redundancy here, ...

Bleach poetry. =D The first thing that springs to attention is the opening of "19." The very short lines really don't do the weight of the situation justice, and they ...

I liked this. It was a neat story about wolves and things. Forgive any lacks of clarity, I'm writing this on zero hours of rest, haha. First things first, the ...

(First detail caught, before even reading the whole thing - prose poetry!) Ah, I see you've tried rhyming. Not a big fan... for one, it's hard to follow the rhyme ...

This is nice. A whole-hearted poem is always welcome, particularly when the writer can write. Firstly, punctuation. You have very determined end stops - but two are missing. Perhaps this ...

Well, entfor, you've writ something amazing here. Would I had written it... but 'tis review time. As stated, this is very lovely. The references not only abound, they maintain a ...

I like it. This poem was tricky to read, in a sense, because until the last few lines I could not place the 'plot,' as it were. But the way ...

Hmm... I don't think I'd call this silly. It's not a bad poem, and it certainly has its moments, but it's neither yet great nor silly. The tone is neutral, ...

Nice. It should be 'rests' in the last line of the first stanza, but I can see why it isn't, here. Dunno how I feel about that. As said before, ...

This was cute, I guess. I'm going to assume you have not yet had the time to proofread. When you do, be on the look-out for missing commas - your ...