TheDayBeforeTomorrow

Hey dogs, Thanks a lot for your review! :) I went back and edited some things in this, it was the first draft after all ^^ As far as capitalization ...

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Oh. Well, that's... um... /epicfail Just ignore me while I go die of embarrassment somewhere. :3

This is pretty good. I think it does need some editing though. I like the theme, very poetic and cryptic. I was confused the first time I read it. Come ...

Oh, goodness. I'm not as good with codes as I thought I was. :)

Pretty good poem you have there, unfotunately I'm not the least bit spiritual. But the last word is actually 'patient'. :)

Wow, that was just... amazing. I'm not sure what to say. It's dark and bleak, and mysterious as well, kind of. Keep writing this way and you'll be famous pretty ...

Hey, I'm here to review your poem. :) Well, first things first, in the fourth line, trikling should be trickling. But that's the only grammatical mistake. The imagery is great, ...

It's cool. You've incorporated emotions as well this time. But I was just wondering... what about the wound that Zorak had? What happened to that? Did he just charge in ...

Ha, it's hilarious! Kind of like making fun of all those peoples who write dreary, serious poems and everything. (Like me, but I don't mind)

I like it! It's mysterious, yet hopeful, and religious at the same time as well. Very well written, again. Sorry, I'm not Christian and don't know anything about the Bible. ...

Thank you so much! I honestly thought this was crappy.

Thanks for your review, it really made my day! I just kind of resent being called a kid. This was written in one of my darker moods, and I hope ...