TheDayBeforeTomorrow

Hey, My first thought on reading this was wondering if I'd missed out on a prologue or something. I scanned Related Items and found nothing, so I continued, a little ...

Hey, Your description of the poem - "A is for anorexia" - was intriguing and led me to believe that this would be longer and a little more substantial as ...

Hey inkcharmer, I quite like the way you've phrased this paragraph! The title and the description drew me in, mostly because you didn't tell me too much about the piece. ...

Hey, Day here to review. I like the subject and the attitude here; we needy and insecure humans can never get enough of the inspirational, uplifting and motivating stuff. However, ...

Hey, Day here to review. First of all, this was wonderful. I loved the story, the setting, the wording, everything. I haven't read the other parts of this, but this ...

Hey, Day here to review. Honestly, I agree completely with Justine. This was amazing. It's simply wonderful. I love how you're completely open, honest and human throughout the whole article, ...

Hey, This was a very interesting piece of work. Honestly, I did not anticipate the ending at all; I thought the black man was here for something a little more ...

Hey adale, I'll start with the things I liked about your poem. I love the first line, it's probably my favorite line of all in this poem. Wonderful imagery there, ...

Hey Thelios! Well, this was a really touching piece. It's heartwarming and indeed grounding to see that a little 9-year-old girl can truly acknowledge and appreciate how much her single ...

Hey there Skyy and welcome to YWS! I was asked to review this by a friend, so voila. It's certainly an interesting piece of work you have here, but it ...

Hey Venin, Day here to review. I liked your story. It's a nice beginning and the way she doesn't know why today is significant adds a bit of mystery to ...

Hey ZaBod, Day here to review, finally! I will be honest here. My first impression of this chapter wasn't that great. The paragraphs kinda bunched up, but that happens on ...

Hey creativityrules, I'm Day and I'm here to review your story. This is a very good story! The imagery and detail you have here is amazing. It created a really ...

Hi Silver, I'm Day and I'm here to review your story! This is a pretty good story! I like the plot here, it's certainly very sci-fi and fantasy and stuff. ...

Hi firepen, I'm Day and I'm here to review your poem! I absolutely loved this! This isn't deep, complicated or cryptic like a lot of stuff I've seen around. It's ...