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Re: Autumn Winds
Here for a short review: I love the feeling of the poem. I liked how you used the language in a simple manner and how it flows all together. The ...
Oct 28, 2015 -
Re: Sky Is Dead
Cooooooooooooooool!!!!!!!!! Mysterious and haunting my two favourite words!. I love the layout of the poem and how it flows from line to line. I'm a big fan of descriptive language ...
Oct 27, 2015 -
Re: No Worries
I'm not really a big fan of really short poems but this one I like just because it's brief and straight to the point. to me it sounded mysterious and ...
Oct 27, 2015 -
Re: Far Away
(Please do not take it personal) This poem is way too simple. Try adding some metaphors and more descriptive language to make the reader interested. The most important thing in ...
Oct 27, 2015 -
Re: Not This Time
I really like it. The use of language is incredible and I can relate so much to it. I love how you made it brief and descriptive at the same ...
Oct 27, 2015 -
Re: I Hate Clocks
To be honest this poem was just a bit too simple. It would have been better if their was just a bit of descriptive language. I felt like it was ...
Oct 26, 2015
