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Re: The Wheelbarrow
I liked all of the garden imagery, all of the wheelbarrows, the grass, the pots, the flowers. Though I found the robot at the end came out of the blue. ...
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Re: The Willow
Hey, I always love nature poetry. It reminds me of Hardy, which I always love. I like the focus being the willow tree - a beautiful, graceful tree. And I ...
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Re: Heat Index
This short story is great because it looks to be a simple conversation, but you can tell from the almsot sarcastic language used that there is deffinitely an underlying unsympathetic ...
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Re: Cinderella
I really liked your references to Cinderella. I think it gave ther oem more interest, rather than it being about an anonymous girl. Because as wide and as interesting as ...
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Re: Now and Forever
Hi. I really liked this poem. It had a great sense of loss, of missing something or someone. When you wrote: I'll look to the stars And scream so loud. ...
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Re: Thine Eyes Do Flit
I find the influence of Shakespeare overwhelming. I think it is great to have an inspiring poet to look to, a path to take, a muse to work from. But ...
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Re: In spite of all that's wicked [II]
I, Abigail, agree with the Abigail below. It was far too easy to read. A dull pattern. None of it seemed to process, and if anything, I found it was ...
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Re: The Darkness Inside
Hey, nice poem. I like your concept of one hiding their inner turmoils. You act your bit. Quite a brilliant line to end it upon. I can't claim great knowledge ...
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Re: Divided
The first line of this poem was absolutely breath-taking. They came to you. Instantly makes one curious, possesses great pace, great tone, gorgeous language already. The violent imagery in the ...
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Re: Cosmic Love
The beginning of this peice is quite gripping, and I love that it is gripping. Your use of her name within the first sentence almost put me off but venturing ...
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Re: A Prohibited Relationship - Chapter One - Hello Mr Hottie.
Hey, I didn't read all of your story because - to be frank - the character didn't interest me at all. You started off my desribing how she looked, what ...
Jul 10, 2012
