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TheAbigail

  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: The Wheelbarrow

    I liked all of the garden imagery, all of the wheelbarrows, the grass, the pots, the flowers. Though I found the robot at the end came out of the blue. ...

    Jul 11, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The Willow

    Hey, I always love nature poetry. It reminds me of Hardy, which I always love. I like the focus being the willow tree - a beautiful, graceful tree. And I ...

    Jul 11, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Heat Index

    This short story is great because it looks to be a simple conversation, but you can tell from the almsot sarcastic language used that there is deffinitely an underlying unsympathetic ...

    Jul 11, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Cinderella

    I really liked your references to Cinderella. I think it gave ther oem more interest, rather than it being about an anonymous girl. Because as wide and as interesting as ...

    Jul 11, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Now and Forever

    Hi. I really liked this poem. It had a great sense of loss, of missing something or someone. When you wrote: I'll look to the stars And scream so loud. ...

    Jul 11, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Thine Eyes Do Flit

    I find the influence of Shakespeare overwhelming. I think it is great to have an inspiring poet to look to, a path to take, a muse to work from. But ...

    Jul 10, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In spite of all that's wicked [II]

    I, Abigail, agree with the Abigail below. It was far too easy to read. A dull pattern. None of it seemed to process, and if anything, I found it was ...

    Jul 10, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Darkness Inside

    Hey, nice poem. I like your concept of one hiding their inner turmoils. You act your bit. Quite a brilliant line to end it upon. I can't claim great knowledge ...

    Jul 10, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Divided

    The first line of this poem was absolutely breath-taking. They came to you. Instantly makes one curious, possesses great pace, great tone, gorgeous language already. The violent imagery in the ...

    Jul 10, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Cosmic Love

    The beginning of this peice is quite gripping, and I love that it is gripping. Your use of her name within the first sentence almost put me off but venturing ...

    Jul 10, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: A Prohibited Relationship - Chapter One - Hello Mr Hottie.

    Hey, I didn't read all of your story because - to be frank - the character didn't interest me at all. You started off my desribing how she looked, what ...

    Jul 10, 2012


You may deem me romantic, my dear sister, but I bitterly feel the want of a friend.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein