ThatOneGuy2002

Amazing, thats got to be the best poem ive heard in a while. I absolutely love the symbolism with letting go, and thus letting go all your fears and doubt. ...

Whoa, now thats a nice one. An amazing tone, but just telling you, its "impatient" instead of "unpatient". But grammatic errors arent as important, overall, great job. Hope to hear ...

Nice. I forgot that l stands for so many awesome things.

You did a good job, this is an amazing representation of the longing for days past, i love the way you expressed this through halloween, a day often expressed as ...

Wow, powerfull message. This is a nice poem, but just a little tip, try to be extremely specific when using symbolism, such as replacing "until ive killed all the sheep" ...

Wow, thats an awesone poem. I like how much of a story it is, i almost want to hear more about this character. I must ask, does this come from ...

Cool. Thats a nice poem u got, needs a little work, but al in all its great.

Np

Whoops, sorry, im new xD didnt mean to post two copies

A nice beginning, though perhaps you should consider being more descriptive on some points, such as the intro, or possibly where natalie is waiting in the doctors room. More description ...

Wow, that is a nice representation of reality, always thinking the world is good, that others know more, and always producing the result that is dissapointment, only in seeing for ...

Not bad, that is and amazing poem. I feel like the story of the people and the story of the stars may have been able to be a little better ...

Cool.

Cool.