ThatOneGuy2002

Ooo, i spotted a possible rhyme scheme for u there, "or maybe weeks, or days....." Maybe add "just one donut please, make it glazed!"

But yeah, so relatable.

Ooo, i spotted a possible rhyme scheme for u there, "or maybe weeks, or days....." Maybe add "just one donut please, make it glazed!"

Dang, that is awesome. I especially love the third paragraph, just amazing. 😍 great job

K, thanks. Happy halloween

Arigh, thanks for catching that, does the replacement look better?

Ok, lol. So, yeah, i did screw up on that description of the wall, probably shouldnt have posted this chapter yet, as I was still conflicting with a good description ...

Hey, thank you for the review. I was perhaps even confusing myself with the decision of wether to keep it past or present tense, as this is the first story ...

Thanks, I origonally wrote this a bit ago, I think that I did a poor job of translating it from where I wrote it dow, as I did it quickly. ...

Thanks for le review %uD83D%uDC4D

No problem, look foward to reading more

Alright, thanks. So, i couldnt fild out a way to space them, even after some attempts, due to me being a nubular noob, however I did make other corrections. Thanks ...

First off, thanks for the review, and for the welcome! I might look into that correction for a random repitition, thanks for spotting it. However, i must say that i ...

Thank you for the poem. :3

Lol. Thx xD