Tere5350

Hi! So first off, LOL. This is incredibly funny in a weird way because...well imagine it, summoning a demon while trying to cook chicken soup :). It is not what ...

Hi, this is Tere here for a review! I guese what sticks out to the most is Martha's solution towards sex. I mean, it is quite surprising how she approaches ...

Hi there TheMarauderBandit! No other words besides I like it. :). Your poem flows really well even though you had chosen to include phrases within the parenthesis. In my opinion, ...

Hi! So I just learned this in US history recently and many people actually have different opinions on FDR. First off, I totally agree with you that his programs were ...

Hi nykolasandrews! So I have read your new format, and it is easier to follow than the first one (of course, that is why you put the second one up, ...

Hi, To start off, I love your descriptions, especially of Molly. You had done a beautiful job of making it so vivid and lively. " Her golden curls tumbled down ...

Hi there, First of all, I love your descriptions and how you are able to fit a lot of actions in a single piece. Even though I feel this is ...

Hi, Wow. I was awed from reading the first four lines. They were both powerful and heartbreaking, and although I wasn't the person who watched the narrator died, I still ...

Hi Tiger! I have to say you surprised me because I expect the plot to be a lot tougher. However, it turned out to be quite happy since everything ended ...

Hi there, this is Tere! I love your structure, especially when you decide to put this into an interview. From Justinian's way of speaking, we can also see what kind ...

Hello there! I can't thank you enough for ending this with a positive note. I'm also in these characters' shoes and I understand (more than I want to because, seriously, ...

Hi, this is Tere! Overall, this piece is quite sad, and I think your use of short sentences and phrases also contributed to this kind of mood and tone. However, ...

This is really heart touching. The structure of this poem, even though the sentences and lines are short, really conveys a lot of feelings and flow. Somehow, I might be ...