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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Deleted 6

    Wow! I am really awestruck by the power that resonates from this poem. It's hit square in the face and left me smiling foolishly. The voice was awesome. It had ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Welcome to the Dark

    Nice poem! First of all the voice in this piece is the most powerful. It was solemn and it had a hint of solitude. I also love your poetic diction. ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Come and Set me Free

    Nice poem! I love the voice. It was solemn, strong and it made the reader want to believe the predicament you were in. I also love the tone and mood. ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Still and Forever

    I love this poem! Especially the rhyming. It gave a really powerful effect to the poem. I also love the voice. It was solemn, harmonious, peaceful and it had a ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Breaking Me

    Wow! I can't actually believe you said this wasn't one of you best pieces! I could only gaze in awe at the way you mastered your words in this poem. ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Listen

    Wow! This is really nice! It seems as if you just poured out words on paper. Although the theme of the poem is kind of cliche, you expressed in a ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Burning Candle and the Moon *edited*

    Hey! You've got a nice poem! I love the voice and the imagery. It's keeps the reader stuck to the words wondering how it's going to end. It's not hard ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hush

    Wow! First of all, I would like to commend you on the fact that you let your emotion go wild on paper without changing anything. Also, I am awestruck by ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: No Sympathy.

    Nice poem! I love the poetic diction cause it's so self-explanatory. I also love the fact that the poem acts as the window into your emotions. Giving your poem a ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: O, Watchman, Sitting on the Roof

    Hey! Well the flaws I saw in this poem have already been spoken of by the past reviewers. Although not all the the qualities of the poem have been spoken ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The White Antidote

    Nice poem! I like the fact that the poem focuses on what we teenagers do everyday to unravel but you presented something so simple into a dramatic piece. I also ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Amen.

    Wow! This is poem is powerful. It is a poem that keeps the reader going till the very last word. It definitely resonates a voice that pierces into the mind ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Body

    Hi! I love this poem! In my opinion, The poetic diction is self-explanatory which makes it easy for a reader to relate to the poem. I also love the voice ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ripples in the Water

    Hi! It's quite smart of you to put this poem under the category of Lyric Poetry. I feel that your words and the voice it conveys is more of a ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: [Removed]

    Hi! I like the fact that this poem is simple and yet it conveys a message which the reader has to carefully look for. It wasn't really hard for me ...

    Apr 12, 2011


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