Temerity

Hey, anna. So it can be really difficult to master short poetry like this; you have only a handful of words to get your message across, so you've got to ...

This is really kind of sentimental and endearing, in its own right. It was enjoyable to read and, as a writer, I totally relate to the woebegone past characters and ...

Hi, Purple! Okay, so I tend to be rather particular about poetry, so my reviews tend to be a bit more critical. To me, this reads more like song lyrics ...

This is interesting, because I felt as though your original intent was to write a love story, but the dynamics going on here between the girl and her imagination is ...

Alright, so this has potential, but as it is, it's a little bare and generic. This is something that's hard to get away from in poetry, particularly when you're writing ...

Hi, Journalist! Okay, so, I hesitated to click on this because of the fact that seeing a poem about poetry innately causes me to huff and eye-roll. It inevitably reminds ...

Hi Weather! Okay, so I'll forewarn you that I tend to be a very picky poet, and this might translate into a rather critical review. You have some really nice ...

Hello again niteowl! Wow, color me impressed. I've never tried to write a short story without e's before but I can't fathom that it's particularly easy, though you pulled it ...

There were a couple of places where the rhythm was a little rough, but there were also some lines that really stood out and made me smile. My favorite lines: ...