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  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: I loved, I killed, then I lied.

    Thanks! I tried clearing questions about the culprit with the line "Now he has taken my credit for killing her" I guess it is not too clear though, thanks for ...

    Nov 19, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: I loved, I killed, then I lied.

    Thanks! I tried clearing questions about the culprit with the line "Now he has taken my credit for killing her" I guess it is not too clear though, thanks for ...

    Nov 19, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: I loved, I killed, then I lied.

    Thank you for your encouragement. I trust you clicked the link. And I'm curious about what you meant by the first paragraph being crammed with information.

    Nov 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: King Of the Clouds

    Abhipsa thank you. Please what are the parts you do not understand? It would be very helpful if you tell me.

    Dec 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: King Of the Clouds

    Jessie thank you so much. I will check those 'bit' immediately. Thanks.

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: my body is not a temple

    Hey I'm Tega, and I enjoyed this piece especially the first paragraph(the first line really!) Probably because it reminds me of The Da Vinci code. The word "crusted" reminds me ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Prophecy of the Red Giant

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: I have Writer's block

    "Oh! I am not very good in essays and articles", I said to myself, when I first came across this post. I opted then, to relive you from your 'writer's ...

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Not connected, Oddly aressted(A teriible, No good,Very, Very Bad Life)

    Thank you!! I appreciate the time you spent in writing this review.

    Feb 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Not connected, Oddly aressted(A teriible, No good,Very, Very Bad Life)

    I truely can't say how glad I am.Thanks for your advice

    Jan 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: The Future

    Hope I could smile now, but i"m in a clinic. Tega Majemite, at your stewardship!

    Jan 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Days of Gold Gone By: Ep.Ten

    I can't say how sorry i am about my 'first' review.well i love the story line,the ideology portrayed in this work.But in abundance are errors,which i find almost unavoidable,except when ...

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Death Puppy

    Great work pal!

    Dec 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Scared!

    thanks

    Dec 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Scared!

    THANKS!!!!!!

    Dec 2, 2013


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