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Re: Prosthesis #1 /P
When you said he undid the boys jeans I thought he was going to chop something else off, but that just shows I'm clearly immuture. So do I XD This ...
Apr 14, 2007 -
Re: The Gate
WTF THAT WAS LONG... You misspelled 'spread' :P This DOES seems somewhat Dr. Seuss-ish... If you fix this up, to be more 'today'-ish, it could be better. Change the stanzas... ...
Oct 8, 2006 -
Re: Ladida...titles are irrelevent!
I really liked this, for it reminded me of the time high-schoolers came to our school and read their poetry... VERY DEEP ANYWHO STANZAS!!! I can't tell you how many ...
Nov 17, 2005 -
Re: math... (rated for language)
I really liked this, but I found a bit wrong with it... mocking the emo trend of slitting wrists and blacking eyes I wear my wristbands proudly I think this ...
Nov 17, 2005 -
Re: Lies & Fake
I agree with Yoshi and TBR... Without stanzas, I easily got confused because I kept losing my place (yet again, I easily get confused over anything :P) Without punctuation, I ...
Nov 17, 2005 -
Re: nothin interesting
I didn't think I was snapping... And I feel so bad... But yet, It's a poem, and I don't want this to rot in the Randomness Forum, so I'll just ...
Jun 12, 2005 -
Re: 1000 Words (Last song that is not mine)
Elizabeth Mei Mathers how dare you EVER post this on the sight... Everyone (who knows me:P) Know that this is MY song (Well, actually Sweetbox's :P) and you shouldn't have ...
May 2, 2005 -
Re: Cute and Cuddly Teddy Bears
Poof. What assignment was this for? (I don't remember the assignments that I don't do... Meaning all of them... :P) Meh. Evil person wanting to shoot an innocent cub... :sobs: ...
Apr 12, 2005 -
Re: Funny Rules
WHOA! This is funny! I don't know how you thought of this... You don't seem this smart in school! :P Oh! And BTW... MOO!!!
Mar 29, 2005 -
Re: A Journey of a Raindrop
Why is this in the Non-Fiction section???... This is better than mine (Duh... I never turned it in :P) It is very informing... I think... Well, I don't like this ...
Mar 29, 2005 -
Re: All for the Good of Friendshipe, Poetry and Pie SCENCE 1
WOW! You posted this too? You like posting school stuffs doncha? Anywho... I LOVE this play! It was so funny! (I played James in the practice performence :P :P) I ...
Mar 29, 2005 -
Re: Skit for Destination Imagination
Oi! I can't believe you posted this on here! At least you put my name into it giving me some credit (I think...) (YAY! I was the peanut dude! We ...
Mar 28, 2005 -
Re: I Am From...
HEY! I don't ever remember reading this in your Writer's Notebook! Anyway, I liked this one, the point you were trying to hammer into our minds was clear, and the ...
Mar 28, 2005