Teddybear

I am honestly not quite sure how to review this. Do I treat it like any other work and go line by line? Do I just do the general stuff? ...

Hey! So, as usual, I'm going to go paragraph by paragraph and give my general stuff at the end. Let us begin. "I wake up plastered to the ceiling of ...

Hello again! Sorry, it took so long, I'm at school and I have this big sewing project to get done by next week, so I've been cutting out the pattern ...

Hey! So, this is pretty new, and I'll be going to chapter 2 next and reviewing that if I have anything to say, but for now I'm here, and you're ...

Hey! This is a pretty short story, so I'm gonna do this differently than I usually do. I typically go paragraph by paragraph, then give my general opinions at the ...

Hello! Yeah, this already has a couple reviews, and yeah, this was posted a while ago by YWS standards, but I couldn't resist. A little side note before I get ...

Okay, I'm gonna come right out and say I don't usually read romance anything. I don't like romance. That said, this story wasn't actually that bad. I typically go through ...

Okay, I'm here, and I have some critiques. As usual, I'll go from beginning to end with the specifics, then I'll go over the general stuff, but first, I'd like ...

Hey, this might get long, I'm sorry. I'd like to warn you in advance that I may come across as harsher than I mean to, and I'm sorry about that, ...

Hey, whassup? Okay, yeah, that was bad. I'm done now. So, I'll be reviewing your piece here, please don't take it too harshly, these are just my opinions and those ...

Hi. You swore in the thing, so I hope you don't mind a bit of swearing here (though mine /might/ be a little worse). I. Agree. You see, I'm on ...

Hello my fellow writer! I'm here to review what could be a very lovely idea, if only you gave it a few adjustments. Let's talk about those, shall we? I'll ...

Hello, fellow humanoid being! I happened upon this and figured I'd write a review, though it might be shorter than most of my others. This is really good, in my ...

Hello, I haven't written a review in a while due to an overdose of homework and that danmed comic book I have to have done way too soon, but I'm ...

Hello! So, first things first, I could never honestly accuse this of being a bad work or anything along those lines. It's actually pretty good. That said, it could use ...