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Haha, wrong button, eh? ;) Why don't you find the topic that this is in reply to and send a PM to a mod? They'll merge it for you. ;) ...

*has ingested a can of Coke and is now quite calm* Heh. ;) All of the ropes, however, were connected to a net on the arm. The repetition of "the ...

As good ole Ben Franklin once said, three may keep a secret if two of them are dead. ;) Quick note, and shame on everyone else for not pointing this ...

Hmm... you have a good idea here, but I feel that it's lacking proper imagery and metaphor. I mean, I didn't feel anything after reading this. *gigglesnort* Oh, Yoyo, how ...

Hmmm... you have a good idea here, but it's lacking life and proper character. *suppresses a giggle* Bwahahahahaha! Rofl, Jabber. Amazing. Deserving of a Newberry Medal and the SUPER AWESOME ...

Yo Trident! *waves* Haha, for some reason I always confuse the 10 with the I-17, which goes nowhere near Pasadena. Glad someone can get it straight. xD Rofl... I love ...

Hi theres! I haven't seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Black. This may or may not be entirely necessarily. ...

Hah, my mad poetry critiquing spree was just practise, so no guarantees that this will be entirely helpful. xD This has a nice meter to it. It's kind of singsong. ...

*squeezes* I love you! All of your poems have given me good practise with poetry and the home stretch of my critiquing goal! :D Anyway... *falls over* Hahahaha! Nice! I ...

*critiques rewrite... because rewrites are better* Wow... this is something I can really identify with. It sounds just like something my novel's main character would say. And I feel totally ...

I officially love you, Yoda. You're going to help me get my goal! I'm so close! =D Sorry, I'm just proud. xD Moving on... This is... interesting. I kind of ...

Woot! I only need four more crits to get 75. Thank you so much! *huggles* *gasp* Oh wow! I really like this one. So simple and yet so powerful. Elegantly ...

Woot! Round two, Yoda. Hah. Thanks again for giving me some practise. ^_^ Ooh, an interesting metaphor. I'm pretty sure I get what you're really trying to say? Lol, I ...

Hey Yoda! Thanks for letting me practise on your poems. It's a huge help. ^_^ Random question -- how do halls fall on deaf ears? *confused* Hm. An interesting little ...

...Stew? Hah, interesting. I personally think it kind of ruins the tone for the sake of rhyming. Not all poetry has to rhyme, dear. ;) The format is slightly annoying ...