Teague

It is very noble and skillful of you to be able to write a narrative like this and not lecture your readers from one side or the other. Really, truly ...

First things first! This belongs in the Scripts forum. *moves* Secondly... well, this isn't really much of a script. Scripts not only have a specific style, but they need much ...

Okay, I told you I'd point out the purple prose, so here's a few examples! The murky woodland began to ooze abhorrence, all in admiration for Eric’s equanimity. Cold and ...

I'm not a poetry critic because I know very little about the medium, but I do have to ask -- what's up with the oddly placed apostrophes in the Spanish? ...

Hi there! I don't usually critique poetry, so forgive me for being a little awkward. Firstly, the title of this poem. I'm not sure you know what antidisestablishmentarianism means. It ...

The parenthesis part was win. But apparently, Jabber is evil and Teague is not? XD The cactus head thing is referring to me. :P Re-listening to this, my phone sucks ...

Hell is noise. It is a cacaphony of vicious sounds, the screams of the damned, the roar of demons, the thrashing of torture. And it is the quiet spaces in ...

A very, very interesting tale. Once upon a time, there was a bunny rabbit. His name was Floppy Ears. He was white and extra cuddly and extra cute. One day, ...

This is truly an amazing poem. The person I really hate the most Has gotta be the internet personality known as Toast! So thus, this poem will be a scathing ...

Honestly, dear? There isn't much to say here. It's a little on the short side, but it's a good concept. I think the ability to convey profound messages in short ...

Soon as you put "Arizona" in the title, you earned a crit from me. XD I'm easily bought. On the rare occasions when the door was opened, the chime would ...

Might I suggest The Perks of Being A Wallflower by Stephen Chbosky? Certainly the best book in the genre you're describing that I ever read. Yes. This book is phenomenal. ...

[spoiler] i. all the great set up hears —a general Fragile Little Things mix— 1. disarm. smashing pumpkins. I think this is just perfect on so many indescribable levels -- ...

Hey Katie, First of all, a few notes on posting things on YWS. Most people are turned off by a poll at the beginning of a story -- it adds ...

Well that took a while to put in order on iTunes... silly files and not doing what my OCD mind wants them to do. Anyway! *squee/tackle* You're so amazing, if ...