Teacake013

Hi , myjaspercat It' is teacake013 here to review you're work So in this piece of writing it seeks to find fresh and uniquely form for the poem, letting the ...

Hi , TiffanyToy It's teacake013 here Well this depends on what kinda of mood you're feeling And who you are I can't tell you what to write but I can ...

Hi , graceellegood it's me teacake013 here to review. I thoroughly and truthfully enjoy your work it was unique!:) I'm not here to judge your work badly Also I know ...

Hi , Tiffany toy I think this is a cool basis but as you said there are things missing. I think that should be a mystery you're trying to find ...

Hi inked it's me teacake013 here to review. I truthfully thought it was the easiest English intro ever!:) I'm not here to judge your work, so I'll tell you on ...

Hi zgar it's me teacake013 here to review yiur story called the War. I thoroughly and truthfully enjoy your work it was unique!:) I'm not here to judge your work, ...

Hi rachellecarter it's me teacake013 here to review. I total love and enjoy your work it was more unique!:) I'm not here to judge your work badly so don't worry. ...

Hi amac it's me teacake013 here to review. I thoroughly and truthfully enjoy your work it was unique!:) I'm not here to say bad things about your work so I'm ...

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Hi Dearnie ......……..... It's teacake013 ….................... Well to start my review I like to say I can see this as a song ....................................................................

This is a really good piece of writing but I must ask why is there italics Revenge part was really awesome and dialogue was great Grammar was great Spelling is ...

The post ha ha cool title Well this piece had allot of emotion and actually very good spacing Dialogue is ok but it could be better but writing this novel ...

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I love the beat of this poem you can defiantly follow the rhythm :):):):)):):):)):):):):):):)):):):):):):):):):)):3:D You're spacing was very good And you're spelling seems great :);):);):);):):);):);

I love this piece your work on this was marvelous.!.... Your spacing was Great . Your punctuation was great. And you're grammar was excellent ! Spell is on point :) ...

It is a nice start, good for and that's from someone who just started to upload his/her but even so, I can say I liked "THE DAY OF JUDGEMENT"...... One ...

I don't really know who leelah ah is but I like how you Sound dedicated It's a great piece of work but if you let me say I wish it ...