TaylaChase

This was nicely written, good job :D I'm not really sure how to critique works like this that aren't really 'stories', but I can give you my opinion. These are ...

This is interesting. It is kind of short, though, so there's not really a lot for me to critique. Anyway, I like the way you list off things that you ...

Wow, this is really good. I really enjoyed this poem, and seeing as I have a horse as well, I obviously enjoyed your topic. I really love horses and I ...

Well, first off, I just want to say that I liked this piece, and also would be interested in reading more if you wrote more. Anyway, I do have a ...

Well, I know this has been up there for a while now, but i was just going through some of your writing and I noticed a few things about this ...

The birds’ morning song woke him, but his eyes remained closed. As your opening sentence this should be more intriguing, it should pull the reader in and make them want ...

Wow, I really like this! :D I think you did a great job on it! Yesterday there was no happiness Yesterday there was no glee Yesterday I was just a ...

Wow, this was really good. I really liked the emotion and the message you so clearly conveyed through you poetry :D Throughout the years of strife and war, Old Glory ...

Wow, I thought this was really good. It has a lot of emotion in it and the message comes across very clearly. I loved it! :D I'm not the one ...

This was very interesting. I liked it. It seems like you have a lot of emotion behind this, but it doesn't really come through on the paper very well. A ...

Well, first off, I like the simplicity of this poem. It's short and simple, yet still has so much meaning in it. Black paints the most colorful sunsets, Speaks the ...

Hey Zanna! This piece was. . . interesting, to say the least. It was well written, although I do have a few issues with some parts. So, let's get to ...

Wow, I love the imagery and emotions coming from this poem. The flow of the poem is very smooth and not forced at all. Some love the sea when the ...

I like the way you summed up the theme of this poem and the emotions into a shorter, but still very clear message. Sitting sadly upon my bed [I know ...

Okay, so first off, I don't really know much about poetry, so I could be completely wrong, but here's my opinion. Torn and ragged battle flags fluttering in the wind, ...