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Tawsif

  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Unfriendly Detours

    Hi, Anu. It's Tawsif here for a review. I liked the opening of the story. It's a sort of situation that will definitely engage the readers' attention when they go ...

    Jun 29, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Hope for a new World

    Fabiha, I'm back to reviewing after a decent amount of time! I was searching in the 'shorts' section for any of my acquaintances, and then I found your story. And ...

    Jun 26, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Romantic Re: Love Me, Love Me Not

    That is a wonderful, deep, and passionate story. You really nailed it! I love the way you write the internal thoughts and conflicts of the characters. Your sentences are thought-provoking, ...

    May 22, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor Re: Forgotten

    A pretty decent work, liberty. Well done. Let's get to the review. I like the story's plot pretty much: A boy suddenly comes across his babysitter and begins sharing old, ...

    May 21, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Someday

    Really deep and intricate story. Well done! The emotions in this story feel very realistic. You can definitely move the readers through the harsh truths and practicalities you've mentioned. I'll ...

    May 17, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: It's A Crow!

    Wow, that's an amazing story! I don't know if you need any reviews for this, but I'll do it anyway. There's a common advice we all writers hear: Use strong ...

    May 9, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Still my favorite ride

    Fabiha, what a story! I'm gonna be very honest with you since you've reviewed my stories in the past: I tried to read this a long time ago, but it ...

    May 8, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror Re: Night Time Surprise

    Hi, it's Tawsif here for a review. I liked the concept of portraying the horrors a child faces when he/she wakes up from sleep midnight. But the elements of suspense ...

    May 8, 2019
  • Short Story » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: Warning: There Is A Severe Plot Twist At The End

    Amazing idea, Horisun! It really piqued all my interest. I see Miraculor77 has already spotted many technical things. I have only one more thing: 'Caused a curse that made her ...

    May 8, 2019
  • Other » Politics, Culture Re: speech for cilmate change

    Great speech. Well done! Just a few typos: You probably forgot to capitalize the first letters here. Could be a technical mistake, I don't know! 'protests are happening to make ...

    May 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: short story opening chapter.

    Hi. I'm Tawsif and I'm gonna review this piece. You added some elements of suspense in your story and it was appreciable. I liked the content of this story very ...

    May 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Missing One

    Hi. It's Tawsif here for a review. I liked the story pretty much. It was brief, emotional, and touching. You reflected the emotions of the characters nicely. But probably more ...

    May 6, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Istri Sejati

    Amazing! Simply amazing! Emotions apart, let's get to the review. First, I failed to understand some of the lines in the story. Please let me know what you meant in ...

    May 5, 2019
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: The stars in their eyes

    I liked reading this story. Good job! Let's get to the review. I was fascinated by all the speeches of the old man. You portrayed his emotions about the memories ...

    May 2, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Fanfiction Re: Josephine and Peppurrcorn

    NaomiPeppurrcorn, This is a decent start for the novel. I loved it. Let's get to the review now. 'But she knew that there was probably nothing in the fridge, since ...

    May 2, 2019


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