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This is a very nice poem, and has rather a nice Moomin feel to it! :-) I really liked the lines "The endless waves a counterpoint that lingers on and ...

This is a very nice poem, although I am happy to say I can't relate to it, I always have something to do. :-) I like the repetitive rhyme scheme, ...

This extremely well written and an amazing first work! I saw this poem from a mention on a different poem, and I thought I must read another poem with this ...

This is a very nice poem, and one where I was expecting the main character to be a hero of sorts near the beginning, and practically hated her towards the ...

This is very nice. It reminds me of a poster I once saw, a cartoon where two people put on paper masks at the start of the day with happy ...

Hellooooooo again! What a cheery poem! I think this is a very nice piece, especially as I was expecting a gloomy poem about cutting or somthing similar. I like the ...

Hellooooooooo! Very good first poem! :-) I like the way you have turned you three repeating statments into questions, that works really well. Another thing I like is that this ...

This is a very nice poem, but I am not sure whether this is Sherlock modern or Holmes original! :-) The best thing here is the amazing title/last line which ...

Hello coversefireguru! (Two can play at evil nicknames.) Despite losing the race, I have three things to console me. I came second I had no internet when you won I ...

Hello Firegirlofconverse, we meet again. This is very similar to your poem December Skies, I guess this intended, going by the title. Is this going to be a series? Anyhow, ...

This is a highly emotional poem, and is very sad. The repetition of the incorrect grammer "I am freak" both allows the reader an insight into the size of the ...

This is a nice poem, with only two things I am unsure about. Firstly the poem needs a little more imagery, to set it aside from the vast tide of ...

This truly was a very emotional poem, and it is impossible to fault. The first verse was by far the best, it firstly ingrained the mood of the poem, secondly ...

This is a very nice poem, and I really can't fault it. (By the way awesome avatar. ) The principle thing I liked about this poem was the steady rhyme ...

This us certainly a very nice poem, with a lovely rhythm and a great rhyme structure. The only fault I would give is that the last line could be improved, ...