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Re: Touch wood
I've never had a splinter before, touch wood! (Ouch) The title is splendifourous pompom, it is always a good idea to use titles that reference things most people know about. ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: You'll still live through it
Hello Pompousadour! This is a very nice poem, although I am not going to pretend that I understood it. :-) In the antiantipenultimate verse I don't see the need for ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter Three (Working title) Scrapped
Hello Dorapomp! This was a lovely continuation of the previous plot, and was evenly paced and the introductionary stage pf the chapter was brilliant. Just a few points: "like gossipy ...
Jan 25, 2014 -
Re: Cranium Clouds
Hello oh SaneSuptleness (or something like that) This is a very nice poem. I was a little taken aback by the lack of punctuation in this piece, but was reassured ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: The Field Of Time
Hello oh Pompadour-spamming assosiate! This is a lovely poem, and well worth the most liked list! The rhythem and everything are amazing! Therefore I shall reveiw this EVIL. In the ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Sinking, Sinking, There Goes My Sanity
This is a superbly simple and simply superb poem, and your rhymes are not forced at all. The rhythm works well throughout the piece, except in the verse: "I've gone ...
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: Abstract Seasoning
Hello pompa! This is very good in your traditional random style! The only criticism I would give is your lack of a chorus, that peculiar entity found only in lyrics. ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter Two (Working title) Scrapped
Greetings pomegranate! (Mwahahaha) Firstly I would like to say that this is highly intriguing, and the Latin or Greek thingy is promising, cause I like that sort of book. :-) ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: Bell To Bell
Hello! Glad to see you have posted this, and I particularly like the subject matter. In the lines, "Big test coming, teach 'em well, Memorize it bell to bell," it ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter One (Working title) Scrapped
This is a brilliant cliffhanger Pompadora, and certainly leaves me wondering. Firstly I would like to say that if this has anything to do with the Arthurian legends and the ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Wrists
Hello! :-) Firstly let me say how happy that it wasn't another poem about cutting (well obviously it is, but not how I expected.) It makes a nice change. My ...
Jan 13, 2014 -
Re: Perfect Girl
This is a very nice poem! I would say, although it is obviously a matter of opinion that repetition of the first verse doesn't work here. In this poem you ...
Jan 13, 2014 -
Re: Lust's Boredom
Hello! First impressions-this is a bit of a crazy poem, and I like it for that. At first I was slightly put of by the title, as I was afraid ...
Jan 13, 2014 -
Re: A Robot-Run Age
Nice to see I am not alone in being against something I am using. I feel however you should make clearer where you stand in this debate. If you are ...
Jan 12, 2014 -
Re: Muted tears
Woof! That was strange! I am not going to pretend I know what this is about in any way, but from a little look at the review below me it ...
Jan 12, 2014
