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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Touch wood

    I've never had a splinter before, touch wood! (Ouch) The title is splendifourous pompom, it is always a good idea to use titles that reference things most people know about. ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: You'll still live through it

    Hello Pompousadour! This is a very nice poem, although I am not going to pretend that I understood it. :-) In the antiantipenultimate verse I don't see the need for ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter Three (Working title) Scrapped

    Hello Dorapomp! This was a lovely continuation of the previous plot, and was evenly paced and the introductionary stage pf the chapter was brilliant. Just a few points: "like gossipy ...

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Cranium Clouds

    Hello oh SaneSuptleness (or something like that) This is a very nice poem. I was a little taken aback by the lack of punctuation in this piece, but was reassured ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The Field Of Time

    Hello oh Pompadour-spamming assosiate! This is a lovely poem, and well worth the most liked list! The rhythem and everything are amazing! Therefore I shall reveiw this EVIL. In the ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Other Re: Sinking, Sinking, There Goes My Sanity

    This is a superbly simple and simply superb poem, and your rhymes are not forced at all. The rhythm works well throughout the piece, except in the verse: "I've gone ...

    Jan 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Abstract Seasoning

    Hello pompa! This is very good in your traditional random style! The only criticism I would give is your lack of a chorus, that peculiar entity found only in lyrics. ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter Two (Working title) Scrapped

    Greetings pomegranate! (Mwahahaha) Firstly I would like to say that this is highly intriguing, and the Latin or Greek thingy is promising, cause I like that sort of book. :-) ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bell To Bell

    Hello! Glad to see you have posted this, and I particularly like the subject matter. In the lines, "Big test coming, teach 'em well, Memorize it bell to bell," it ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter One (Working title) Scrapped

    This is a brilliant cliffhanger Pompadora, and certainly leaves me wondering. Firstly I would like to say that if this has anything to do with the Arthurian legends and the ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wrists

    Hello! :-) Firstly let me say how happy that it wasn't another poem about cutting (well obviously it is, but not how I expected.) It makes a nice change. My ...

    Jan 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Perfect Girl

    This is a very nice poem! I would say, although it is obviously a matter of opinion that repetition of the first verse doesn't work here. In this poem you ...

    Jan 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: Lust's Boredom

    Hello! First impressions-this is a bit of a crazy poem, and I like it for that. At first I was slightly put of by the title, as I was afraid ...

    Jan 13, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Satire, Realistic Re: A Robot-Run Age

    Nice to see I am not alone in being against something I am using. I feel however you should make clearer where you stand in this debate. If you are ...

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Muted tears

    Woof! That was strange! I am not going to pretend I know what this is about in any way, but from a little look at the review below me it ...

    Jan 12, 2014


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