TakeThatYouFiend

This is absolutely amazing Pompadour! This is undoubtedly one f the saddest moments in the Harry Potter series, so it is lovely to find some poetry about it. I was ...

This is amazing Dorapomp!! So meaningful yet meaningless. One of my favorite bits was most probably the first paragraph. It starts the piece of so well, and is truly exceedingly ...

Hello! Firstly let me say I am doctor who fan, so I may be slightly biased. I really liked this, especially the Susan reference. Everybody is moping about Amy, but ...

This truly is an original subject matter. Love the hedgepig! Right, when I clicked on this link, I didn't know what to expect. The title is deeply intriguing, and stood ...

Hello! Very well done here! I really liked all of this poem, particularly the anti-selfish theme, objecting to overselfpity. The only problem is really quite nit-picky, and that is lack ...

This is a lovely poem, worthy of your own high standards! The line breaks work really well in those positions, and, although generally this would be slightly thin on punctuation, ...

Hello Z. Well done, this is really good. *patronizing face* (I like second hand bookshops!) There are a couple of things that I would change, namely: -"He was always quite ...

Hello Windsailor! What I liked: -I really liked the last two lines, I like a rhyming couplet at the end of the poem, I think it may be over-exposure to ...

Greetings! And well done for getting on the most liked list! I am generally not a big haiku fan, so I will try to be reasonably positive. This is a ...

Hello! I have returned! This is a very good poem *envy* and I love the rhymes. all of your imagery is spot on, so I can't help you there. Also ...

Well done, and a very interesting title! The last line with the female metaphor is slightly confusing. In what way is asphalt a vengeful woman? Also "as a" seems an ...

This truly is a very nice piece, and I am glad that I clicked on your link. And thank you also for the honourable mention! Firstly, on the essay in ...

Wahoo! The fiendish fiend strikes! First of I wish to say I really like the subject matter, I love almost all poetry with a dream theme! (Hehehe that rhymes! ) ...

O.k. this is not at all humourous, and not what I expected after the other reviews I wrote for you. (By the why I have been review-bombing you;- thought you ...

A slight contrast to my own Saturday nights, I don't have a GTA to lag! *peers over half-rimmed spectacles* "what is this Face book?" However the poem itself is rather ...