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Dying would never come as a box of treasure although no one knows what lies after death it all seems like a mystery from our world a very good writing

what you were told were through in the sense of how it happened loved the way you put the idea into writing a lovely piece

a good way to release pains in the heart by sharing with the reader you share your pain leaving us in emotional the best way to pour worries and pains ...

from beginning to the end i enjoyed every part of it though the story ended tragically to the girls death living the reader in a quiet and sad mood the ...

a very good poem to write about a dear friend and a wow to the bold letters you made a reader remember that dear one alive or dead a great ...

tomorrow is your favorite day a day to be happy loved reading the poem and thanks for sharing

tomorrow is your favorite day a day to be happy loved reading the poem and thanks for sharing

wow a very good writing especially these you rest your head at the nape of my neck and tell me about the home you will make for us when we ...

that's what happens tho every one when the first love at most

hmm a nice write but i really didn't get the point

hi love the flow of the poem from the beginning to the end life without you is pain All you've given me is gain Under the sun or the rain ...

hi love the flow of the poem from the beginning to the end life without you is pain All you've given me is gain Under the sun or the rain ...

hi love the flow of the poem from the beginning to the end life without you is pain All you've given me is gain Under the sun or the rain ...

hi love the flow of the poem from the beginning to the end life without you is pain All you've given me is gain Under the sun or the rain ...

thanks for the review dear friend excited you enjoyed reading