TNCowgirl

I wasn't exactly expecting that. :D Very good addition to the story. There aren't a whole lot of things that are off. I like the reactions a little better, though ...

First I wanted to say this seemed like a very good poem. I say seemed because every time you mentioned a different fish I found it hard to pronounce them ...

The way that he brushed off the pain when he was in the bathroom threw me for a small spinner. I really liked the story and didn't really see much ...

There isn't much more I can say after so many people have gone over it. Let me start out by saying it was very good. Though the flow may be ...

All I could think about was doctor who. :D Made me smile. Anyway, I really liked it. I'm pretty sure it's a fanfic seeing as Clara is in it. There ...

I really enjoy the plot behind this story for I am a sucker of forbidden love. Though for some reason the way it is written almost seems off to me. ...

This was really good. There were a few times where the words didn't seem to flow as well together as the rest of it, but as the story progressed it ...

I don't know if I can really count this as a review or not seeing as poetry isn't my strong suit. But your poem was at the top of the ...

Oy vey that one hit home. :S I know the feeling. :'( Seems to be just how I feel about my ex. It is so good, just great!!!! I'm not ...

There is going ot be more right? Ok, I only give out readers crits. I don't do all the grammer stuff sense it's not my strong suit. Anyway, from the ...

*tears* I can't even crit this properally cause this is exactly how me and my boyfriend are. Just we've only known each other 2 years, we might as well have ...

WHOA!!! That was an awesome story, but how was she using him? I'm confused. If there is more I want to know about it. :P You can't just leave it ...

That was a sweet story. I acctually liked it, there wasn't much that needed to be fix, I don't say there wasn't anything because I'm sure someone else will find ...

You deffinatly lost me. It seems she is with this Jake dude at first, then she doesn't even know him. Please tell me if I read it wrong, because I ...

It was pretty good. Don't post so much at a time. Split up section one and 2. :D. Also, run it through spell checker. Other then that I really liked ...