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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Prologue

    This is a rather interesting prologue, even though the beginning felt a bit repetitive I still rather enjoyed it. Although the beginning drags in my interest, normally that would be ...

    Aug 17, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Descendants- Chapter Two

    Hi, TJJProductionsGirl here with a review I love to help and I read the first chapter of the book and I have been looking forward to reading the next. Alright ...

    Jan 31, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Other, General Re: Persuasive essay on Recycling

    This is a very informative and good essay. It has just the right amount of expression on why to recycle and then it gives true facts. I myself write essays ...

    Jan 31, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Edge Undermines Emotional Weight- How Tokyo Ghoul Lost My Goodwill

    This is a very unique piece and the fact that you used tokyo ghoul as an example was a very questionable thing at first but when I finished I see ...

    Jan 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: The Hartmans - Chapters Two and Three

    The first chapter was amazing and so is the third and the second. I couldn't spot any spelling errors this time and I was very interested in the story. But ...

    Jan 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My Jellybean

    Im not really good at poems but I can tell you the many things that I understand and the reason why this is a good poem.(Even if love poems are ...

    Jan 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Humor Re: Mr. Tooth Fairy

    Hey I am her to give you a review. This is a rather interesting piece of writing and I can't say that it makes that much sense. After all it ...

    Jan 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: I'm A Hurricane

    This is less of a review and more on what was good and what was bad about this. First of all I am about one year younger than you are ...

    Jan 19, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Descendants- Chapter One

    This story is really good but there are a few things I feel that I need to point out. 1. Towards the beginning when he servant said that his son ...

    Jan 19, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Smoke and Mirrors

    I only have written one poem and it was for school. It wasn't that good either. So what I'm trying to say is that I don't write poetry but I ...

    Jan 13, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Game of Fear: part 1

    So to start off I would like for you too read through your writing and change all of the I's that you have written to capital I's mainly because you ...

    Jan 13, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Haunting Home

    This is a really nice short story but there are a few things that I would like to point our. The first thing that I noticed that when he said ...

    Jan 13, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Revolution Chapter 1

    This story is amazing. Oh great, now I have to go through the very annoying process of waiting desperately for the next chapter. This story was incredible and amazing, I ...

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Horror Re: The Hartmans - Chapter One

    Great story, I could understand it perfectly. It really is good except the introduction. Yes it was great but first of all the way you started off with being already ...

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: I pulled my heart out from my chest and placed it in a box

    This is incredible of course it's poetry so I can't say much or criticize anything that will make you better. But I can tell you the good things that I ...

    Jan 10, 2018


I wondered why we put villains in our stories when we have plenty of them in real life; then I realized that maybe we wanted stories where the good guy wins.
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