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Re: Sunshine
Well hello there. :mrgreen: It's nice to see you've taken up writing as a hobby. When you're just starting out and think of it as a sort of hobby, it ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Girl of Sunshine
Hello!! First off, I think that this was a very nice written poem. It tells the real truth. If you read every sentence by itself, it all fits together perfectly. ...
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: Forever light
Sensational! You discussed time, anger, light and death, without making it too obvious as the sub-title or under laying subject matter. Love, you used these four elements to discuss love, ...
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: We love too fast and learn too slow
This poem definitely has a "quirky side." But I guess it's supposed to. I have never actually heard of a Shape Poem before, so this is my first at even ...
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: Soon Enough
Hey Fictional, SynSeta here for a review for the promised review. There isn't for much to say, on fact this is going to be a terribly short review due to ...
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: Rest, my love.
Hey jordan, SynSeta here for a review for the promised review. There isn't for much to say, on fact this is going to be a terribly short review due to ...
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: Trapped In My Heart
Yo! Kanome It was a very interesting poem. The mood is so dark and while reading this I felt nostalgic because I've also been in this state of sadness, feeling ...
Jan 21, 2014
