Sylar

This was an okay piece, but it could do with a little work. "It happened a year ago, on a late October evening... An important letter had arrived... Hand delivered... ...

I was very confused about this. You said it was a script, but there's no screen or stage direction, no transitions, no dialogue. I just don't really know what's going ...

This was quite interesting, and I'd like to read more. "To Be Continued (obviously)" don't say obviously. Please. It just sounds unprofessional. "child of hispanic origin" if this isn't important ...

I thought that this was a very nice scene! Now I haven't read Hamlet yet, but I think I will now to better understand this piece. First of all, one ...

I thought this was really nice. I'm not the biggest fan of poetry in general, but you have a way with words, Bella. Your language is beautiful in this piece. ...

I thought this was really nicely done. Usually I'm not a fan of poetry, but this was great! I think you should take out the word Eureka! It just seems ...

I thought this was pretty cool overall. I liked it, I want more, (and I think you should present this in writing class). Anyways, let's start off with criticism. So ...

I liked this chapter, but it did not wow me as much as your other chapters. I'm pretty sure there were grammar and punctuation errors, but I'm feeling lazy so ...

This was a really sweet poem, and I loved it. My thoughts and prayers go out to you and your family. Sorry for your loss. Anyways, it's the first poem ...

Well, now I'm sad. Man, this piece was good, it really made a point. I'm going to be thinking about this for a long time. I didn't really see any ...

This was an interesting first chapter to this novel (I guess?) you're writing, and I'm not sure if I'm hooked. First of all, it was very short. This whole chapter ...

This was a great addition to your novel The Hybrids, probably my favorite of all! Once I finish writing this, I have to review chapter 4! Formatting is always fine, ...

Wow. Just wow. This was an amazing story, and I'm just left, ugh, it's perfect. I didn't see a lot of grammar issues, just "why would I go home? when ...

I really enjoyed this second chapter! I reviewed the first chapter of The Hybrids, and I saw that Chapter Two was up. First, you should rate this 12+ for language, ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I've been reading a lot of dark poetry, and this was a perfect poem for me to read. I just didn't understand a few things. ...