Swavvy123

I ABSOFREAKINGLUTELY LOVED IT! I glanced through the other reviews on here. They talked about bad punctuation and the use of and's and whatnot but I think that only added ...

no problem. what you mean makes sense but the way you wrote it, it may confuse. maybe you should add the band aid idea. I think it would work well. ...

What the hell? lmaooo. Oh wow, this is hilarious. I really like how you captured what drunk people are all about. I don't even have anything to say 'cept well ...

Thanks so so much. Your review made me smile. :)

yeah well, it's fine if you want to leave it this way. I just thought you should look into those cause it made it harder for me to read.

Thank you so so much. I'll definitely look into correcting my mistakes.

bread?? lmao. I really liked the beginning and I still liked it in the end but I'm a bit confused though. bread?

First off, really cool title! second off, the content is really confusing. It's really cute but I think you need to add a bit more. lol

Thanks so much. I wonder if you read the first one? I might not be able to update a lot because I'm going back to boarding school this friday but ...

Okay so I'm commenting on my book. Before reading this maybe you would like to read my other two chapters to avoid you confusion. Also, many people have been commenting ...

You haven't read my other two chapters so I don't think there is much I can do about you not get the "showing" I think when you read them maybe ...

hi guys. ive corrected all spelling mistakes and the line breaks. thanks for all your help and support. :)

hi guys. I'm reviewing my work again. I've corrected the spelling mistakes and paragraphing so the story is way better now. thanks for all the advice. If you find a ...

Hi. Ironically, I am Nigerian and igbo as well. I do have quite a good knowledge of my language so I guess that's why I was able to spell it ...

Hey. I'm writing about my work gain. Many people have been telling me about the spelling mistakes and lack of paragraphs. I did correct them and use paragraphs but they ...