Swavvy123

hi, i like this story. its very original. you made a few grammatical errors here and there but these can simply be corrected. Also make more use of punctuations. One ...

I thought this was beautiful. It is informal though due to the use of "ain't" though I know ain't added more effect to your work. I liked how you were ...

i loved this piece. it is simply amazing how you are able to express the writer not knowing their love with the glass theme. i loved the bit about her ...

I know it's not your first language so it's okay to make some mistakes. You misspelt blew and caught. I absolutely love this story. The story line is just too ...

I like your work. It's fun but I don't understand who Godot is or who this person is.I'm not even sure who the narrator is or what exactly is going ...

Hi Okay I don't know if this is the first entry you're writing because this is the first I'm reading. There are some details that a reader like me doesn't ...

Hello Okay, I don't get what you mean by James life-piece...unearthly numbers.. I do like how you described the scene. It gave off this sorta creepy, dark room which I ...

There is a bit of tense and verb confusion which might be due to perhaps excitement at writing the story. I noticed some misspelling in your work but then it's ...

I've read your first chapter...I do have a few observations and comments. I like the idea and story line. It's very captivating though I don't think you should start with ...