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Well... you should post up the rest :).

To make it XXX... Ahveen rolled over, getting into a more comfortable position. Next to her lay Chris. 'That was amazing,' breathed Ahveen, 'I've never seen a ding-a-ling used so ...

Hmmmm... So you are saying Albus was hoodwinked? By Severus? Naturally inccorrect. Occlumency (or whatever it's called). Albus dying makes it harder for Harry? How so? Because losing his greatest ...

Glad you liked it :).

And how does Dumbledore dying help Harry? Surely him being alive would be a lot more use (not to mention Harry wouldn't then also want revenge on Snape). All that ...

That started off really well (reminds me of Animorphs...). But then the ending... it left some to be desired. Mainly because your characters doesn't seem to find it too odd ...

I wrote this whilst wondering around the theme park on holiday. I'm still not sure what possessed me to post it up though ;).

I think (though don't taken my word as law) that it's to do with graffiti. I suck at poetry, so I can't give you any ideas though.

I'ts R because I'm English and don't understand the American rating system ;).

I liked this - it flowed well. You seem to have taken the Hollywood approach on how teens behave, but whatever ;).

Nope - never read any of his stuff. I've heard of him, of course, but I've never taken the time to read any. Anyways... Yes, it’s me again, with my ...

I read it... and I didn't think it would lead to this. I'm sitting here, tyring to figure of it's that a good thing or a not so good thing ...

I would like a large popcorn... Okay, I would like... *points to a a popcorn* That one, and... *points to another one* Than one, and... Ah, that advert was great. ...

Is this for that thing that is being advertsied on this site (write a story starting with 'hell found me'?).

I find it annoying when people go on about hating someone that: a) They have never met b) Has never done anything to that person and c) Does not affect ...