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Read it :). Not much to say, this continues the story well, and shows a little more into Emily's mind. The paragraphs aren't formatted very well for a forum though ...

Another chapter :). The only problem with this (for me) is really the spelling mistakes. But as it's clear what the words are anyway, it's no major problem :). Looking ...

Well, from this - I'm guessing that Emily's gonna go to the camp, and something is going to happen. More likely than not, she's going to find herself in another ...

I bet you, next year you'll wish you made her 14. And then the year after that you'll wish you made her 15 ;). At any rate, go for it. ...

I assume this is the begining of the story, right? Anyways, another good story, and once again - you've succeeded in capturing my interesst. And you've given Emily a captivating ...

Cool - I enjoyed this 8). My only gripe is that a couple of sentences seem a little long, but they're not a major problem :).

That's really good - it flows well and has some captivating imagery. The only bad thing I'll comment on... is that I can't see how this fits in with the ...

And then, bang! he was a traitor all along. Actually, I reckon he wasn't a traitor. Notice the emphasive put on the 'Unbreakable Vow' (or whatever)? Also remember - 'do ...

TBR, have you been at the sugar again? Anyways, this doesn't exactly give much info, so I can't really say about how it looks. Nor can I really suggest a ...

I liked this :). It was easier to understand what's going on than the first chapter, but kept the same beautiful language as before 8).

Wow - that uses some pretty good imagery and wording. The only downside is that it's also quite complicated (which may be why you have no replies to this yet). ...

How can you claim this is a report? Do you actually believe that aliens love orange soda? Cos no one loves orange soda. Not, not even Kell. Anyways, this was ...

I really liked this. Especially the begining - it was very atmospheric and tense to read. I have only two problems with this piece: 1) You sometimes used passed tense, ...

That was pretty good (especially for a first try). My only real nitpick is that a few parts do flow to well. And this one sentence stood out to me: ...

I know this site questionaire thing that you answer and it tells you which level fo Hell you go to, accorinding to Dante's thingy. I got to Level 6 (I ...