Supermal

It was cute :) Good, too. I liked it.

I like it. Good twist on things. Now I'm going off to read the next installment :)

It was supposed to be a compliment :wink:

I loved it! It was... Fun, I guess is how I would describe it, :P The rhyming, sure, wasn't perfect but if it was, I don't think this peice would ...

It was okay, but nothing spectacular.

I liked it. It's wasn't really raw and deep or anything, but it still managed to show some good emotion.

I have not read it, but from what I hear, it's not well written and the author claims that a lot of the stuff he made up was true. Still, ...

If I have w.b., I often find myself writing random descriptions about anything and everything, and from that I can sometimes develope a story.

I like it. It's deep, dark and disturbing. :D

Awesome once again. :D I don't think you should change the title, but of course, as you write more, an even better title might show up.

I love it! It's written so elegantly. The detail is perfect and you really capture the characters emotions perfectly.

The words flowed nicely most of the times, but sometimes they got a little jumbled and the swears don't really suit the poem.

In between, coming closer to good :) Starting to get interesting.

I like it, it sounds really good so far. Are you planning on working on it further? I like the detail. It gives you a good picture of everything that's ...

I liked how the story is written, and that surprised me because most first person stories are pretty distasteful. It has lots of detail, and is quite intriguing.