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This was.. gooooood! Omg, it was really good! You enthused a lot of tension throughout it and you kept up that feeling of terror. At the beginning I was a ...

This is good, I liked it. I had trouble how you started a rhyming rhythm going on and then you just stopped rhyming though. You had gained such a good ...

Hm, I liked this although I couldn't quite grasp what the story was majorly about, so it didn't create much of an impact upon me. But this is probably because ...

This is really good and hard hitting too! It reminds me of the adverts that have started to come on TV here in England where people get ready for a ...

It's good I'll give you that, but there are a few things that jumble it up a little. You tend to cram in those syllbles especially in stanzas two and ...

First, and this is before I have started to read the actual poem, I just want to point out the punctuational errors. You have a lack of punctuation here, which ...

Argh no! Sorry, I'm gonna be a bit harsh on this - which isn't what I'm usually like. You're structure is okay, if you go for that kind of stuff ...

This was actually... It stunned me because I liked it so much. I'm not a fan of those long poems, and expecially not those that are like.. rather long but ...

This is good, although I'm not a major fan of depressing poetry. Good job at keeping your structure and flow consistent; that's always a good thing as it makes it ...

First off, I like the idea for this - I mean, it's a serious issue but I like how you've kind of put a playful edge to the tone of ...

This is pretty good. I struggled with it in some places, I must admit, but you have some good originality on your ideas you've used and the language that you've ...

This was good. Simple as. I loved it. I think that you had the right flow throughtout the entire poem - that is a hard thing to comeby; I find ...

;o Breaking Dawn as in the Cullen books? I haven't read that yet, but I cant wait until it comes out over here. I thought the rest of them were ...

Oooh, I got one word for this, matey; naiice. Okay, I dig the whole using the letters of the phrase for each line kind of pieces of work. I dont ...

Hm, this goofed around with my brain box a bit mainly because I'm not all that familiar with the modern free verse, so when I come across it I tend ...