Sunshine101

Hi. Here's a quick review: This poem was great on many different levels. I loved the emotional power and impression you gave on the reader. You really know how to ...

Ok, here's a quick review! I thought this piece was great and worded perfectly. Just a few suggestions and questions: At the beginning and for most of the story, you ...

Here's a quick review. Wow! I like this a lot. I really feel the emotion through this piece. It was beautiful. I have to agree with KissMe99. With such a ...

This is interesting and definitely original. You wrote the haiku perfectly but some things are confusing to me. When you say "Lies are my best friend, They give me safety ...

Hi, here's a quick review. I do agree with LGF. This is awkward, you know, reviewing you BF's work..... This was lovely. Short, sweet, yet meaningful. Hers are some things ...

Ok, here's a quick review. I do not know Dutch of French but I think that was the point. I was supposed to lay attention to the sound of the ...

Hi, here's a quick review! I didn't seem to find any grammar mistakes but some lines that can be clarified. "He grips his pointed teeth" - I'm not so sure ...

Wow. There was a lot of deep emotion flowing through this poem. Well here's a quick review from my perspective. Just a few tweaks that you don't have to use, ...