Sujana

This is pretty straightforward, the intention is clearly stated, though I'll be honest, it isn't eye-catching to me. I'm not the executive whose going to sieve through drafts for the ...

A worthwhile experiment, no doubt--one I'm a little iffy about. On the one hand, it's definitely ambitious, much more ambitious than anything I've read in the past week. While the ...

Genuine question--is the protagonist a guy or a girl? Not that it's important, but I read their character as a guy in the starting paragraphs, and then was taken aback ...

Another day, mostly another review. I'm interested in seeing where this goes, though if I'm honest not nearly interested enough to continue it if the second chapter comes out--and don't ...

This is labeled a novel chapter, and while I see how it could go other places after this one, I feel like this would actually make a good short story ...

I'm a bit of an opponent when it comes to Set Pieces, or short stories/books that present a scene that has conflict without actually resolving it. Basically, wordy paintings, where ...

Night of the Black Moon *squints at title* *turns to work* *shrugs* Well, I've never cared much about titles relating to works anyway so Introduction Horror is a difficult genre ...

It's obviously intriguing, there's definitely a lot of questions to be answered, but the first order of business is to find out whether they're worth being answered. I see that ...

I haven't used my catchphrase in a while now, so I'll start: interesting. Something I'd like to mention briefly, because I thought it was actually quite helpful: I liked how ...

At this point, I've reviewed enough of your works that I feel like you're a second brother of mine--a second brother obsessed with hair, but I'm deeply obsessed with a ...

Question: Would you consider this a chapter of a book, or an actual short story? I feel as if there's more to this story, and thus it ought to be ...

Interesting. I see why you thought it was worth posting--the premise on its own would be worthy of an entire book, but as a short story it works just as ...

Strange. Lovely. Interesting. There are a lot of words that I quite like. Some words that I don't. The internet makes a big matter of picking weird words and facts ...

Well. I'm familiar with some of your work, so I might as well answer this while I can. Of course, I'm not going to review this like the average work, ...

The plot is about a poor young british non aristocrat falling in lovwith a wealthy black african princess --Description. *squints at description* *rereads work* what. The Beginning Dear friend, How ...