Sujana

Emotions are tricky things, even for short story writers such as myself. Poetry allows for these ghosts to wander freely on pages without the hassle of storylines or hooks, but ...

Some Criticisms and Praise: -"Believing even themselves that they had felt bad for him." Awkward sentence structuring. Try "believing they felt bad for him" or something that would fit the ...

Huh. I thought she was talking about chicken. "But chicken is yucky, dear reader" DON'T JUDGE ME AND MY LIKING TOWARDS CHICKEN, THEY DESERVE MORE LOVE. Overall, I think this ...

Okay screw it I'm taking one for the team. DO YOU HEAR ME, SANGUINES? I HAVE DONE THIS FOR YOU! I WILL NOW SPORK THIS FANFIC. This is obviously a ...

I concur with Yams when they say that the caps were of no use. In fact, it could've been a detriment at some point. I personally think the point of ...

I don't know, as a non-poetic guy this makes me happy. I've always been a fan of oxymorons, and to see them all in display makes me happy for some ...

This was weird. I like weird, but I think I like weird with a conclusion. I don't know, I felt that the whole writing was just meandering around, looking for ...

I like this article. Granted, I like a lot of articles focused on sexism as a person living in a very openly religious and often patriarchal community, but that does ...

you ain't old when you twenty-two son you old when you wake up in the middle of the night crying the name of your old buddy who died in the ...

This seemed a little amateurish, if I'm honest. It could use some work. I mean, the intent and the plot seem interesting enough, but the grammar and spelling issues make ...

(Before Reading) I'm down for blasphemy. Fuck the gods. (After Reading) Wow, and I thought I romanticized blasphemy. Congratulations, you've officially pissed off a good number of Christians while sim

I sort of hated it in the beginning and then I grew to really, really like it. I don't have many problems with this, because it shows off what writers ...

Honestly, I feel this was incredibly cliched. Quirky best friend? Check. New neighbor? Check. Texting? Check. Somewhat prudent protagonist? Check. Shirtless scene? You're ready to be the most generic

I find it funny how the title of the work is 'unfinished', and the ending feels a little like it was unfinished as well. Was that intentional? I feel that ...

This was, overall, a good poem. As a person with a mother who died of cancer this was a little hard to read, so it's great that it wasn't too ...