Sujana

Before I begin, I'd like to say that your first sentence might need a 'than' rather than a 'then'. Or perhaps I understood it wrong, who knows. This was a ...

Poor Mr. Holmes. He didn't get his oatmeal! How cruel of you, author. I feel that this would make a very exceptional journal novel, if you've ever read one--I'm thinking ...

I suggest you try putting this through a proofreader, if it's at all possible. I usually use Grammarly for my spelling corrections, so you could just copy and paste this ...

A thing I've learnt over the years is that distance and involvement is significant in a story. If the person themselves aren't gay, but they have an anti-gay friend and ...

After some brief reading, I think I've figured out what my main problem with this work is: it feels more like a summary of things than an actual work. All ...

Hm. I didn't realize the journal was in computer form. Was she dictating/talking about everything? That would explain the strange speech patterns, but it really wouldn't explain why her to-do ...

I think we've all been fascinated with the ability to bring out characters from books into reality--it's a fantasy, really, but to merge reality with fiction would produce some interesting ...

I suppose the intelligent never do catch a break, but it's hard to say whether or not the author is intelligent when they barely show it. We've seen this trope ...

I guess this was cute. I wouldn't know, considering I'm not a part of the demographic this is aimed at. Don't get me wrong--I think this is good on its ...

- "Who is your favorite U.S. president?" This is the sort of opening I imagine I'd utilize when I was ten years old. It's not a bad thing to start ...

As a former Christian whose read other religious-themed works, I'll say that this at least acknowledges the problems believers must face once reality strikes them in the face. I've obviously ...

Well, I expected another shoddy love story, but I got something at least a little more interesting. I feel like this deserves eight or ten reads, the sort of thing ...

Happy Review Day. As a former Christian, I feel that this doesn't represent my viewpoint on the Holy Ghost (that's what my friends call it anyway). However, that does not ...

Initial Impression: aaaawwwwwww Professional Impression: I really like this work. It doesn't need conflict to be good, like other stories, because the intention is to make the reader feel, for ...

Happy Review Day. I think this work is good on its own, but as it is it sort of annoys me. It seems to be rushing into the plot when ...