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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Seventh Crown I

    An interesting story. I'm somewhat intrigued as to where this might lead us to, but for now, let's look at the highlights for my little notes and corrections. -"It was ...

    May 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Royal Drinks and Marks

    Cruz. CRUZ. THIS GIRL HAD A CRUSH AND TED CRUZ. and no, don't you dare tell me that was a mistake because that Canada reference cannot be a mistake. Okay ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Monotony of Life

    I'm not sure if that boring explanation of a morning routine was intentional or not because, hey, you call it 'the Monotony of Life'. Of course there has to be ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My Lost Promises-Chapter one

    A note before I begin--this really should be bumped up in the rating scale. I'm not sure by how much, you'll have to go to someone else for that, but ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Adlestrop

    This was really cute, and sort of really sad. I really liked the idea for this short story, but the fact that it is such a short story does hinder ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: The True Value to a Thesis

    This had a very good concept behind it. I'm not lying about that, by the way--I would genuinely read about an artistic student going against the conventional rules of academic ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Sorrowful...

    I don't know if this is reviewable as this is a journal entry, so I'll leave one part here to be like a little comment on your blog and another ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: 11. Outrage

    I have a conflicting feeling about this. I always have a conflicting feeling about cat fights, because they never end well. It's like a drug--one minute of ecstasy and several ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: 10. Defense and Old Friendships

    Now. This is starting to look like something a particularly solid YA book about coming of age. I will admit, reading through the first drafts I had my doubts as ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: 9. Truth

    Hey there, Soul. It's me again, here to review your ninth chapter since it already came out. This was also a pretty interesting chapter, descending action-wise from the last chapter, ...

    Apr 23, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Crowning Glory

    Hello again, Joel. I seem determined to read and review all of your works that come out to the green room, aren't I? At this point I've sort of grown ...

    Apr 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Fallen Angel Pt. 2

    This was a notable chapter. I like how calm the angel is currently, despite everything, but I don't think that was intentional. We'll talk about her characterization later, but for ...

    Apr 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The last celestrian prologue

    Hello, Spartan. Just Ellstar dropping by briefly for a short review, just to see how things are going. Firstly, the highlights: -""Hmm these creatures have no sense of fear towards ...

    Apr 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: 8. Not Ready

    Aw. Poor Alchemy. I mean, I know I pounded on her a few reviews ago, but now she's less bitchy and just really naive. There's something about this sort of ...

    Apr 19, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Mind

    I may either be getting soft or I'm finding a lot more works I really like on this site, because I just liked two works today and I don't recall ...

    Apr 18, 2016


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