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Re: Picked
Hey there. So this is going to be a bit of a short review, because you haven't given me much to build off of anyway, but I just wanted to ...
Jun 28, 2016 -
Re: Another Zombie Novel (not actual title) Prologue part 1
Oh, how I've missed a good old zombie story. I'm interested in seeing what you can bring to the table, but I'm not afraid to tell you that the topic ...
Jun 28, 2016 -
Re: I Am Nobody
Darn, shifting from Welcome to Nightvale podcasts and this short story is way too perfect of a transition. I really did like this short story. There was something strange about ...
Jun 28, 2016 -
Re: But If You Close Your Eyes
While this story did begin very well for me, it slowly deteriorated towards the ending, and where the dramatic moment was supposed to pique it instead fell down a bit. ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: 1. Differences
I will be honest here. The way this first started, it did come off as somewhat childish. It's not like the first person point of view telling us, the reader, ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: The Case of Schadel Kueper: Chapter 3
Okay, now that I've gone back to this book, I realize I must've missed something (correction, a lot of things). I'll just merge my questions with my plot criticisms, alright? ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: The Sun Is Still Gonna Rise, Then Why Not?
While I do like the sentiment of this article, I've actually had these thoughts myself (no more, of course, because of reasons similar to the one you've written about), and ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Outlaw - Part Two
Your work here is spectacular, actually. I really like the vibe of the whole ordeal, the sensuous thoughts of the main character and how even through the amount of objectification ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Crime Scene Examination: The Death Scene Checklist
I feel like this work is better off in a medical journal or a writers blog to help other writers research on their crime novels or something, because it was ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Making a Difference...How?
Hey there son. I'm going to give this one a quick review, and while I liked it overall, I did have a few issues with it. I'm not going to ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Emerald Treasure: Chapter 1
This was definitely an interesting beginning to an interesting book. I will admit, the premise seems a bit cliched, since we already have Nathan Drake, Lara Croft and Indiana Jones ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: District 16 - A Collection of Memories (1)
I will say this--this was incredible. I have some complaints, but I don't measure how incredible a work is by how many complaints I have about it. I measure a ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Pros and Cons to the Death penalty
Hey there, love. It's Ellstar here to review a bit, because I made a very foolish promise not to stop reviewing until I either die or the little box gets ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Childhood Memories: The Curse of Poverty
While I do like this piece a lot and the hopeful tone it had, I couldn't help but feel like it was pushing it's message a little bit too hard. ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Right to Happiness
You know, I've read a couple of things from you already, and I can tell that you like surreal stuff with deep meaning. In other words, do you want to ...
Jun 26, 2016
