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Hello, Spartan118! I usually don't like reading poems (I'm reading more on YWS nowadays), but this one was clear and simple and easy to understand, but it leaves room for ...

Hello, BubblegumGoddess! Beautiful chapter you have here! I really want to know what happens next. Just a few minor concerns: "Together we stood up and walked back over to the ...

Hello! I have to say, this is a beautiful little story! It's so captivating and I just love the little interactions that each character has with one another. Just a ...

Hello, Quieen! I love the concept. I feel like, it's just so 'cute' in the beginning. I felt like it would be any ordinary romance story, but I was surprised ...

Hello, zerorest1game! Profound lyrics here! I mean, woah! Okay, just a few minor things here. In the first stanza: "Don't let it get to deep it's toxic, Slow down hear ...

Hello! Beautiful prologue, I have to say! Just a few things I want to say: 1) Are you sure you want to keep this as a prologue? It seems more ...

Oooh! Such a beautiful poem! I feel like I can just see the man in front of me, with a sad expression frozen on his face. Anyway, there are only ...

Hello, brooklyn193! This is a really good concept you took, and wove into a little story! It's cool looking at things from Persephone's point of view. Just a few suggestions, ...

Nice! I really want to see what happens next! Here's what was a little confusing though, you used quite a few unfamiliar terms. I suppose you can't 'explain' really, in ...

Beautiful poem! I love how you summed up what basically every human on Earth seems to go through at some point or the other (or maybe not...). The last line ...