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A very lovely poem- Short, yet so painful- I wanted to run into said house. The imagery was perfect(Or maximum great, as I don't believe in perfect.), the butterflies, the ...

It was a really good poem- you clearly need to have more self- confidence. I liked it because you did the real lyric poetry- you didn't only caught an emotion- ...

I liked it very much. You truly managed- in that short paragraph- to tell a story, to create a character one can relate to, and to do it all very ...

It's a start- and a very respectable one at that. I might be a bit arrogant seeming in this review- but remember my main field is poetry- and I'm sure ...

She's a diamond hitting light. The beautiful moon touching midnight. A gentle tree, hitting the cool summer breeze. This magnificent representation always, she leaves. A staggering loveliness, I plead

This is an amazing short story! the characters and descriptions are as lively as I ever seen- I honestly felt like I'm there myself. William Fischer was surprisingly easy to ...

Hey- loved the piece! The story- the pain- is so real that it's heart-tearing. I hurt for the voice who tells the poem. I think the last stanza ruined it- ...

Hey, first thing, I liked it- a lot. Your descriptions made the characters seem real lively. It had to be done. And I was the one who had done it. ...

'Ha! What can she do? She can’t even peel an onion!' The words ring in my head - again and again. I cover my ears, trying to shut out the ...

A single car idled in the parking lot and at this time of night it was no surprise(this is a clumsy way to pass the message, how about: '...lot, not ...

Hi, I would only do the first and third (no second, for some reason) ones right now, hope you don't mind... Nostalgia is felt, will to cry; Vanishing Point, something ...

What do you care if other people think you're too dramatic, shove it in their faces. If you love storybooks, do storybooks, don't worry about what others think of you, ...

“WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU? WHAT SORT OF CHEAP TRASH ARE YOU?” bellowed her dad.(liked the start) She looked up from her desk and looked(to the) left at her reflection ...

It feels so strong, Pulsing inside, Gently at first, Then consuming. You don’t know it. I didn’t once. (as there's no rhyme here anyway- I'd suggest putting this line differently. ...

Well, I came to this review with mixed feelings, from one hand, it's a bit too simple, too raw- on the other hand, that's its charm, the simple rhymes, the ...