StuckOnEarth

Hiya! Space here for a short lil review. Holy crap. I couldn't NOT review this. Once again, you've created a truly beautiful piece of literature. Flash fiction can sometimes be ...

Hiya! Space here for a review~ First of all, I just want to say I really like this! The grammar, the spacing/stanzas, the rhyming, the topic---I think it all fit ...

Hiya Lems. I posted a comment then thought "what the heck" and now I'm reviewing it. I'll start with the grammatical errors and get those over with: -"--your strong" should ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! I'm a big fan of alien, sci-fi stuff, and this was absolutely perfect! It gave me a Twilight-Zone-type of feeling, like that one episode ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! Wow! I've got to say, it's pretty good. I like the concept, it has a childish feeling to it (a little girl collecting palm-tree ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! It's been awhile since we've interacted, and you're writing is still amazing! Something that I personally find challenging when writing poetry is making it ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! Hm, I would start with the grammar mistakes and such, but there really isn't any. The single mistake I found was that it was ...

Hiya! Space here for a review. (Disclaimer: All of my criticism is meant to be constructive, I am in no way trying to hurt your feelings or call it a ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! Wow, I really don't know what to say..except that this is amazing!! It flowed so well, it was such a heartbreaking story told in ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! Thank you for sharing this deep, and relatively personal poem about falling apart at the seams, giving up. The rhyming is very even, each ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! I can tell this is one of the poems that is very personal, not just a literary piece formed from a random idea, but ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! I enjoyed the witty commentary, and the way it helped build the personality of the protagonist and their fellow (oblivious and very pissed off) ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! Wow, this was absolutely AMAZING. The metaphors, style of writing, description, the topic--it all mixed together into a heart-wrenching, yet sadly relatable, poem. Some ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! This poem has an obviously dark and personal topic, referencing self-harm.This person (you or the protagonist) seems to not be proud of what they ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! I really enjoyed this poem, it was very sweet and flowed very smoothly. I liked the concept--a young girl, pretty and innocent as a ...