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Re: Never Forget That We Were Ever Chapter 1
Very cool story. It was funny when the guy held his underwear. I would have hid my face if that happened to me. And the concept about the zombie must ...
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Re: Spooky Story
Storybraniac here to review. OK,m so you really did fool me with this. Even when I saw how short it is but hadn't read it, I was thinking this was ...
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Re: If the mirrors had eyes... Chapter 1
I have been searching for these kinds of horror stories and at last I found one. I liked everything from here an I am waiting for the next part. But ...
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Re: Unbelievable night
Hi there Here to review for the Apple dumpling gang! Yes, that really is our name 1. "My heart was going to explode, I couldn't breathe. My thoughts were “This ...
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Re: Dear Nate,
Yes Nate. You rock. The poem has truly explained Nate and how he is and his character. I really like review days cause I get extra points I try to ...
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Re: Humanity Views
Nice speech on thanksgiving day. It's true that people should thank everyone everyday and I totally agree with it. The speech type of thingy was beautifully explained. And no grammatical ...
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Re: "Birthday Make-over" a scene from SMILE
The Story was fantastic. But I didn't actually understand the concept at the beginning. Then I found out that the girls were lying. And don't you tHink your story is ...
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Re: Cancer
Wow cool poem. Sad too. Poor people who have cancer. We can't even do anything for them. why can't people have cures for cancers? Maybe they might have in the ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Cancer
Hi, a very nice piece of work you' ve got here. I loved the rhyming scheme- it was great and didn't sound forced at all. A very unique idea you ...
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Re: Darkness Surrenders My Soul
This is garbage. The whole story has grammatical mistakes. I did not understand the concept of the story. Maybe you should have took your time to write the story and ...
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Re: the stars are masters of deception
Oops sorry for that cause there was some mistakes.This poem is so good that I can't help reading it all over and over again. It has perfect rhythms an everything ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Together, The American Way
Oops sorry for that cause there was some mistakes.This poem is so good that I can't help reading it all over and over again. It has perfect rhythms an everything ...
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Re: Horror stories
Super cool horror stories. Love ya if you're a boy, great job if you're a girl. Please write more horror stories or I will murder you! (Just joking, I am ...
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Re: City of Undying Secrets
Wow! Nice poem. I wanna go inside the town of silent hill. Must be nice and spooky. The poem was very nice and Spookily explained. ( I am being super ...
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Re: The Season of the Dead
Oops sorry for that I always forget to turn on the review button.The poem does not have rhythm. It's more like the shortest story in the world. Might have been ...
Nov 24, 2013
