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Storybraniac

Can you hear the violence? Megaphone to my chest. Broadcast the boom boom boom boom. Make em all dance to it.

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Horror Re: Never Forget That We Were Ever Chapter 1

    Very cool story. It was funny when the guy held his underwear. I would have hid my face if that happened to me. And the concept about the zombie must ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Satire Re: Spooky Story

    Storybraniac here to review. OK,m so you really did fool me with this. Even when I saw how short it is but hadn't read it, I was thinking this was ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: If the mirrors had eyes... Chapter 1

    I have been searching for these kinds of horror stories and at last I found one. I liked everything from here an I am waiting for the next part. But ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Unbelievable night

    Hi there Here to review for the Apple dumpling gang! Yes, that really is our name 1. "My heart was going to explode, I couldn't breathe. My thoughts were “This ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dear Nate,

    Yes Nate. You rock. The poem has truly explained Nate and how he is and his character. I really like review days cause I get extra points I try to ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: Humanity Views

    Nice speech on thanksgiving day. It's true that people should thank everyone everyday and I totally agree with it. The speech type of thingy was beautifully explained. And no grammatical ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Script » Realistic, Humor Re: "Birthday Make-over" a scene from SMILE

    The Story was fantastic. But I didn't actually understand the concept at the beginning. Then I found out that the girls were lying. And don't you tHink your story is ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Cancer

    Wow cool poem. Sad too. Poor people who have cancer. We can't even do anything for them. why can't people have cures for cancers? Maybe they might have in the ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Cancer

    Hi, a very nice piece of work you' ve got here. I loved the rhyming scheme- it was great and didn't sound forced at all. A very unique idea you ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Darkness Surrenders My Soul

    This is garbage. The whole story has grammatical mistakes. I did not understand the concept of the story. Maybe you should have took your time to write the story and ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the stars are masters of deception

    Oops sorry for that cause there was some mistakes.This poem is so good that I can't help reading it all over and over again. It has perfect rhythms an everything ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: Together, The American Way

    Oops sorry for that cause there was some mistakes.This poem is so good that I can't help reading it all over and over again. It has perfect rhythms an everything ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Horror stories

    Super cool horror stories. Love ya if you're a boy, great job if you're a girl. Please write more horror stories or I will murder you! (Just joking, I am ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Mystery / Suspense Re: City of Undying Secrets

    Wow! Nice poem. I wanna go inside the town of silent hill. Must be nice and spooky. The poem was very nice and Spookily explained. ( I am being super ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Other Re: The Season of the Dead

    Oops sorry for that I always forget to turn on the review button.The poem does not have rhythm. It's more like the shortest story in the world. Might have been ...

    Nov 24, 2013


I want to see people turn and writhe; make them feel things they cannot see and sometimes do not know.
— Anna Held