StoryWeaver13

My problem with this is that there are a lot of lines in here that I've heard a thousand times before. It just makes the whole thing sound kind of ...

I love the wording and whole idea of this, it's very clever. Reading the title I thought it would be horribly cliche (most things about love are, aren't they?) but ...

A perfect statement of how I've been feeling lately. Emotions personified. You had an elogant use of words, yet at the same time it felt really relatable. I loved the ...

In the rain washed streets of LA, Kammal Bradie leant leaned against a street lamp in a pool of light, puffing on a cigarette. Good wording, it paints a strong ...

Oh my gosh I love this and I can totally relate! I miss my best friend so much; this makes me a little heart-sick. :( But it was a great ...

I think the plot sounds really interesting, but this was more of a dull information dump above all else, and really didn't capture my attention. First, think about how you ...

I like this, it's a good poem and the ending really gave me that moment of "ohhhh, NOW the puzzle-pieces fit together! NOW it's interesting!" Very cool. I didn't like ...

I closed my eyes. This was it. I reached my goal. I made it to the track finals and I was going to win. It took a lot of work ...

Aww, sad. :( Still, I have to review honestly. Negatives: I think the repetition of some of the lines took something away. I was also confused by the last part, ...

I like this and the basic idea, there are just a couple of things. First off, it felt like the poem was divided about half-way...I'm not completely sure why, but ...

Hey there! I like the idea behind this poem, and the story's well-developed, I just think it needs a little work. Just think about tweaking it here and there to ...

Wow, I really like this, you use great imagery and imagination. I felt like there was no real structure, but it was still a really great poem. My only suggestion ...

Hey, here to read this next chapter. When you ' r e skydiving and your sure you’re going to die, you don’t exactly think Hmm… where’s my coin? I want ...

I like it!!! *clicks like button* This is really creative, and the whole dream thing used to actually happen to me when I was little (and a even now I ...

Monty Python!!! :lol: I agree with the other person who posted, you should write a short story about this. *sighh* Poor plot bunnies that feed on well-written plots, I think ...