StoryWeaver13

I like this a lot, the imagery is beautiful and the words are just articulated really well. I see a lot of works on the site that are intentionally short ...

I think my problem with this is that, when you have such a short piece, you need to make it clever. This is fine as it is, but it lacked ...

I agree with this sooo much. : ) I hate how seriously everyone is taking life (and how everyone is almost FORCED to take life seriously....whether it be good grades ...

I don't know, this poem is nice but it is lacking a certain uniqueness that I'm usually picky about finding in poetry. My problem is (and I've said this in ...

I really like this. It's kinda got that off-beat personality, and I think that's really cool. A couple people might/probably will complain about the inconsistent rhyming, but personally I've never ...

Not that I had a license either, but I failed my Drivers' Ed tests 2 times. *gasp* He should've worn his lucky pants! Okay, irrelevant.... This story is cute, but ...

Typically poems that are short-lined and quick lack the emotional impact that people intend to put into them. This, though, had a perfect amount of rhythm and pace to really ...

The cold endless expanse of white was before me and like every doctor I had begun to get bored. Bored of what, like every doctor? The weather? Death? His/her job? ...

I feel like this was lacking a general mood. Personally I just didn't get a strong image or emotion from it, and really I think that's just what this is ...

This was good, it definitely made me smile and nod. *sigh* So true, and I'm guilty of many of these things myself. My one issue is that you changed rhyme ...

This is pretty cool, but I felt like it was really just the beginning backbone of something. Like I felt like you could've expanded this further, and really brought us ...

Okay, so my problem with this is that it's just kind of typical for a love poem. Romance poems (or romance in general) is a hard category because it's so ...

I actually like this quite a lot, and I'm not a romance-type person typically (at least, not unless it's half-heartedly squeezed between a bunch of action scenes, ha ha. XD ...

This was pretty different from what we usually see on the site, but that's what I liked about it. You have a really mature outlook too. But what I really ...

I should really collect these poems I write and label them as a collective something, the majority of them including this one are written in under five minutes and in ...