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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Warriors: Friends in Need

    Thanks, Esther. Littlestorm is original, and so are the others. "Did some cat mention prey?" asked the newcomer. "I certainly did. Your name?" "Dragpaw." StarClan, was that the best name ...

    Jun 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Summer Storm

    Hi Morgan. I just wanted to let you know you have an extraordinary poem here.

    Jun 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Friends in Need

    Thanks Sir Knight.

    Jun 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Something I Dug out of my Files (The start of a prologue)

    Who's should be Whose, you know. :)

    Jun 9, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Our World

    Thanks, Evi. I believe Foracker is Sam's last name. :smt004

    Jun 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Mr.Helium

    P'raps you should capitalize "earth."

    Jun 9, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Maid and the Stone

    Festival Night Three nights later the full moon cast its light on the islanders gathered beside the sea. All of them were silent. An otter named Talan was the first ...

    May 15, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Seeker: Book 1 Of The Noble Warriors Trilogy

    Good show, my friend. Is the book printed in America?

    Apr 29, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: A Flash Fiction

    There... wasn't any symbolism. This was simply an assignment to write a descriptive piece.

    Apr 21, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: School

    How very interesting. I have very little to add to the review.

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Beyond Reach: a depiction of What it's like to have...

    Vox, if it's all right, I'll pray for you.

    Mar 30, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: FANG: A Maximum Ride Novel

    Hey, Hero! I'm rereading Fang now, and Mom's next in line to read it. I sort of agree with your review. The thing is, I wish Patterson had saved Ari. ...

    Mar 26, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Dawn Reports 4

    Another fine report. One thing that's sad is the lack of attention to good literature. One can find an entire secontion of dime-a-dozen romance novels, but few actual good reads.

    Mar 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Texas is Bi-Polar

    Yes indeed. My brother Yagaron is an avid scholar of Spanish.

    Mar 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Gollum inside

    A small point for you: The name Gollum comes from the old word "golem," which is an artificial creature with no soul.

    Mar 23, 2010


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites