Stori

Thanks for your kind comment. I'll see what I can do about reviving this particular tail- er, tale.

Not only have you written beautiful lyrics, but you also have an angelic voice. I think Sepia would be proud of you.

You're welcome.

Using gender-related pronouns is sexist? Since when? I am a man; I'll be a man when I leave this world (die). How does stating my gender, which I was "assigned" ...

Good poem, but likely it could be better if you focused more on the message than an arbitrary rhyme scheme. Keep in mind that there are many types of poetry, ...

Hi, it's me. I'd like to go over your work in the interest of improving it. Shoko’s father, Hinata, was always disapproving of Kevin and her crazy antics. Kevin was ...

Hi, it's me. I'd like to go over your work in the interest of improving it. Shoko’s father, Hinata, was always disapproving of Kevin and her crazy antics. Kevin was ...

...I seem to have a knack for alliteration.

It was my honor.

I don't think a poem is automatically good because it rhymes; in fact, some poems are held back because they rhyme unnecessarily.

Lions don't live in jungles; jaguars do.

Glad I could be of help.

Told the fellows hearts as so easy to break What does this line mean? I know poetry readers are supposed to interpret things on their own, but it simply doesn't ...

Thinking of marrying an editor? ;)

Believe me, I have a problem with perfectionism too. I also have the weird idea that first person is best written in present tense, third person in past. Don't ask ...