StoneHeart

Hey Tortwag, Black here for a quick review. (Sorry, I don't have a lot of time). Okay! So this is looking like it's going to be really, really fantastic! From ...

Hey Noelle, Black back for my third Review on your work! Okay, again, congratulations! Another intriguing, impressive, and GREAT chapter! Your originality is amazing (though this academy is giving me ...

Hey again Shindigg! Black here for a quick Review! Okay, again my congratulations! This piece was far more impressive than the previous one in my opinion, far better pacing and ...

Hey Bigmacloves . . . noticed that the second part was up so I thought I'd drop by for a quick review. Um, okay, in this piece I'm beginning to ...

Hey Shindigg, Black here for a quick Review! First off: IMPRESSIVE work! No, really, I am truly impressed. Your grammar is EXQUISITE, your detail is UNHEARD OF, your idea is ...

Hey Catnip, Black here for a quick REVIEW! Okay, right to business! From what I see here this is a type of blurb. It's not got enough linear information and ...

Hey Roberts! Black here for a Review! Okay, so first off! Amazing piece of writing you've got here. It's a bit too abstract and hard to follow for my taste, ...

As Updated Review Okay, so here I am to re-review for you! Okay, you're doin' a great job here! The breaking up of all that dialogue really helped, and your ...

Okay, heya @bigmacloves, Black here for a Review! Okay, so first off: Nice work. Your descriptions are very impressive, your spelling is great, your grammar is really pretty good, your ...

Heya Forest, Black 'ere for a quick Review! (From the looks of your profile I should give you a big "WELCOME BACK TO YWS" as well :)). Okay, first off! ...

Heya GriffinClaw! Black here for a short Review! Okay, first off! Nice work, I completely DO NOT agree with you theme, but I still appreciate how you showed it: Good ...

Heya thar! Black here for a quick review! First off: Great work! No, seriously, you have a great idea goin' here and you seem to have the skill and the ...

Okay, hey Aley (Poetry whiz), Black here for an inconsequential and tiny review! Okay, first off! Impressive piece here! You're whole idea/ theme was well written, with great wording, spectacular ...

Heya Noelle! Black here for another quick Review! Okay, hello again! So let me begin: This piece's pro's and con's are much alike those of the first chapter – You ...

The First Only Once. Hey Frances, Black here for your requested Review! Okay, so first off, this was great. Well written, with good grammar, good style, good spelling, a bit ...