StoneHeart

Hey Redbird, Black here for a quick Review Day Review! First off, nice work. You worked your theme and idea into the story nice and linearly, with good wording, good ...

Hey SpaceSoldier, Black here for a review! Well, I'll try to be nice! :) I can see that you're pretty new to the whole writing thing, so welcome! But, I ...

Okay, so, Black here for requested Review Day Review! First off: Interesting piece. You showed your whole point, threading your way through the process neatly, using good (If a bit ...

Okey, hey thar! Here I am, back for another Review Day Review! I enjoyed this. Your pacing, spacing, grammar, style, and argument were all good. I liked it. You presented ...

Guinea! Haven't seen you 'round in a while! Great to see you've gotten back! I just noticed your name in the green room and thought I owed you another review. ...

Hey CM, Black here for a Review Day Review! So, first off: O.o. This was well written, with good action, lots of violence, and adequate grammar and pacing! You did ...

Hey Rydia, Black here for a quick Review Day Review. First off: Nice piece here. You have very good, powerful wording – interesting too if I may say – and ...

Hey Cosmo, Black here for a real quick Review Day Review! Okay, so nice work here. A little bit of some odd grammar, a bit short, but it was good. ...

Hey thar! Black here for a quick Review Day Review! Haha! Finally a piece of lyrics/poetry with some rhyme! I'm so tired of reading all of these tiring narrative poetry ...

Okay, hey Word! Black here for a quick review! First off I'm going to announce what a nice piece you have here. (Not that I expected any less from you). ...

Okay, so Black here for a Review Day Review! Okay, so good work here! You present your point, idea, and theme well, with good words, and good logic. This is ...

Hey Embers! Black here for a Review Day Review! First off, it appears that another impressive piece has crossed my path today! Your use of emotions, your wording, and your ...

Heya thar! Black here for a review day Review! So, first off! ANOTHER impressive piece (I'm running into so many today). You have a powerful theme, powerful wording, and a ...

Okay, hey Erza, Black here for a review day Review! So, interesting piece of work here. Powerful, good wording, bad formatting, messy grammar, good theme, well written :) = good ...

Black here for a Review day Review! Okay, so I'll give you this: This is amazing. You have great originality, an amazing looking idea, and lots of prospective action. You ...