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Luckily she stopped it by pushing down with her hands- using what little strength she had left to save herself. The luckily line isn't doing it for me, it sounds ...

Sarran is the most talented, most gifted, most promising, and most arrogant student the ihari-kar has ever seen. I don't really like the redundancy of the "most" However, I really ...

For some reason, I think I've read the first paragraph somewhere before. Not the exact words, but the premise, the whole "not talking" thing. Everyone seemed to like the idea, ...

We had to interpret this story in theater. Our group did it as a "game show" where the "prize" was being stoned to death. scary. When I first read the ...

I was very disappointed when it WASN'T a trilogy. The same author did a few other series, but I could never get into them as much as Trickster's Choice/Trickster's Queen. ...

I'm tired of the empty words, But still you sing softly--so Softly humming lonely notes That haunt this echoing throat This last stanza doesn't make sense to me. If the ...

I'll be your friend!!!!!!!! I have a home but it is in a rural area. Where no one can bother me. Now i am happy. But now you are sad ...

murmur words. “Go to sleep, close your eyes.” The flow of this doesn't seem quite right. You might try: "Go to sleep, Close your eyes." Other than that, it's great. ...

Mum and Dad try and keep it hidden, but their enemy from Briar Rose College, Mallory, she was the one who put me in this position . This doesn't make ...

Some say math is the basis of life. But no, I say it's words. I think that the "but no" messes up the flow of words from the very beginning. ...

I read these books way before they were made into movies, and I have to agree. They are AMAZING. I myself am an avid Harry Potter fan, however His Dark ...

I picked up the urn with my mothers ashes in it and lifted it up. This is redundant. You don't need to say picked up and lifted up in the ...

I really liked it. It was funny and dramatic at the same time. Very you. Quite. You see, you people don't realize that you are all much more barbaric overall ...